Writings of a Mad Man

So I found an old folder of writings in a box we'd yet to unpack in storage as pulling out the Christmas stuff.

I'd like feedback on what's there so far, especially the most recent entry regarding the novel.

The poetry stuff I don't care about. I wrote those between calls when I worked at Blue Cross Blue Shield our of boredom.

You can find them at http://www.writingsofamadman.com

Thanks!
Jason